Lyrics that I wrote
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Lyrics that I wrote
For a song. I also have the music written down (heavy and dark). Comments?
Alone in the Dark
The streets are empty
Night envelops me
I look up and wonder
Is there a heaven for me
What am I here for
What if there's no reason
Why am I living
When I should've died
Drinking, playing
Laughing, crying
Sinning, praying
Living, dying
Now it's the morning
But it's still so dark
I look down and wonder
Is there a hell for me
What am I here for
What if there's no reason
Why am I living
When I should've died
We are alone in the dark
We are alone in the dark
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
Alone in the Dark
The streets are empty
Night envelops me
I look up and wonder
Is there a heaven for me
What am I here for
What if there's no reason
Why am I living
When I should've died
Drinking, playing
Laughing, crying
Sinning, praying
Living, dying
Now it's the morning
But it's still so dark
I look down and wonder
Is there a hell for me
What am I here for
What if there's no reason
Why am I living
When I should've died
We are alone in the dark
We are alone in the dark
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
I look at those lyrics and I think of a rock song in drop D with a melodic chorus.
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
[quote="User"]
i think i ... could comment, but i'm not going to
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These are not final. I could still add maybe a verse and change words around a little.
i think i ... could comment, but i'm not going to
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These are not final. I could still add maybe a verse and change words around a little.
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
[quote="shadowalk"]
I look at those lyrics and I think of a rock song in drop D with a melodic chorus.
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It's not a rock song. It's a really heavy, metal song.
I look at those lyrics and I think of a rock song in drop D with a melodic chorus.
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It's not a rock song. It's a really heavy, metal song.
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
it's karmablade all over again
<blockquote class="ipsBlockquote" data-author="jorsh">
Omg Ali is so hot I want to fuck both nostrils, earholes, even his armpits and elbows. Basically I want to fuck him everywhere except his ass and mouth.
To jizzfinity and beyond
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<blockquote class="ipsBlockquote" data-author="Hitoshura">
also when you exit an unsuccessful interview you should just leave them with: 'if you can't slam with the best, you'll just have to jam with the rest'
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Omg Ali is so hot I want to fuck both nostrils, earholes, even his armpits and elbows. Basically I want to fuck him everywhere except his ass and mouth.
To jizzfinity and beyond
</blockquote>
<blockquote class="ipsBlockquote" data-author="Hitoshura">
also when you exit an unsuccessful interview you should just leave them with: 'if you can't slam with the best, you'll just have to jam with the rest'
</blockquote>
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
Are my lyrics not brootal enough for you
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
the lyrics for any song ever written sound stupid and this is no exception
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
I guess you're right.
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
So what should I do, scrap em?
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
That line that goes 'Now it's the morning, But it's still so dark' is pure genius.
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
[quote="sassapants"]
<blockquote class="ipsBlockquote" data-author="Lt. Conrad Gillett" data-cid="551027" data-time="1435345688">
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(heavy and dark)
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<blockquote class="ipsBlockquote" data-author="Lt. Conrad Gillett" data-cid="551027" data-time="1435345688">
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(heavy and dark)
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
archive: the good
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
i wish i was a better hard-on bearer and could write something supportive of imran's literary aspirations
more metal
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
[quote="Lt. Conrad Gillett"]
It's not a rock song. It's a really heavy, metal song.
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It's not a rock song. It's a really heavy, metal song.
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
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i wish i was a better hard-on bearer and could write something supportive of imran's literary aspirations
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You can bash them if you like. Register your disappointment.
i wish i was a better hard-on bearer and could write something supportive of imran's literary aspirations
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You can bash them if you like. Register your disappointment.
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Re: Lyrics that I wrote
they are definitely not socialist enough, i fixed them
The streets are full of workers
We envelop the night
I look up and wonder
Is there a utopia
What am I here for?
What if there's no reason
Why am I working
Exploited, I tried
Working, paying
Laughing, crying
Slaving, praying
Living, dying
Now it's the morning
Factories still dark
I look across and wonder
How to save us
What am I here for?
What if there's no reason
Why am I working
Exploited, I tried
We are alone in the dark
We are alone in the dark
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
No factory lights for me and for you
The streets are full of workers
We envelop the night
I look up and wonder
Is there a utopia
What am I here for?
What if there's no reason
Why am I working
Exploited, I tried
Working, paying
Laughing, crying
Slaving, praying
Living, dying
Now it's the morning
Factories still dark
I look across and wonder
How to save us
What am I here for?
What if there's no reason
Why am I working
Exploited, I tried
We are alone in the dark
We are alone in the dark
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
We are alone
No factory lights for me and for you
more metal
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