nearly finished song
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nearly finished song
super rough yada yada, lyrics/vocals/etc will change later, some vocals missing. try to ignore the mix. almost finished but got some writers block at the end, might cut that last blast beat part. feel free to tear me apart or let me know if it's cool
https://youtu.be/HheC3Iobk3c
https://youtu.be/HheC3Iobk3c
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Re: nearly finished song
Not available?
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Re: nearly finished song
does the link work? https://youtu.be/HheC3Iobk3c
refresh maybe?
refresh maybe?
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Re: nearly finished song
Nvm needed to open the app
Damn dude I love the riffs you come up with.
The vibe of this song is just perfect. Dark, aggressive, desperate and suffocating. Love it.
I know the ending isn’t done yet but you might end with that blast part changing into a breakdown, keep the blastbeats going with a fade out or have it end abruptly.
Are you going to record bass for your work too? I’d love to record bass more as a session musician. Just gotta get myself a bassguitar again.
Damn dude I love the riffs you come up with.
The vibe of this song is just perfect. Dark, aggressive, desperate and suffocating. Love it.
I know the ending isn’t done yet but you might end with that blast part changing into a breakdown, keep the blastbeats going with a fade out or have it end abruptly.
Are you going to record bass for your work too? I’d love to record bass more as a session musician. Just gotta get myself a bassguitar again.
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But it comes down to this:
Don’t think too much, trust your gut feeling and don’t doubt yourself too much. Because all of this stuff is really good.
Don’t think too much, trust your gut feeling and don’t doubt yourself too much. Because all of this stuff is really good.
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Re: nearly finished song
Playback on other websites has been disabled by the video owner.
Plays on the youpube page though.
Sounds neat :neat:.
Plays on the youpube page though.
Sounds neat :neat:.
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Re: nearly finished song
Don’t do a fade out. Fade outs are gay
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Just finally listened to this. Was actually really good. I really like the vocals. They sound tortured and suffocating like vahmpy said. Impressive. I personally hate fade outs. I feel inadequate giving actual composition tips because I’ve never played an instrument in my life but I wouldn’t make it much longer than it is now, imo. I’d like to see the lyrics when finished. Is the song called “swords?”
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This is cool zima, your vocals remind me of ner gal a bit
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rhino wrote:This is cool zima
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Vocals sound nothing like nergal. Are you ok Ryan?rhino wrote:This is cool zima, your vocals remind me of ner gal a bit
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Re: nearly finished song
i think the fadeout is just there because it isn't finished yet. placeholder outro
this whips ass dude, don't really have anything constructive to offer but i look forward to more of your jams
this whips ass dude, don't really have anything constructive to offer but i look forward to more of your jams
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https://youtu.be/awvZZ3eSsg4jorsh wrote:Vocals sound nothing like nergal. Are you ok Ryan?rhino wrote:This is cool zima, your vocals remind me of ner gal a bit
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Re: nearly finished song
shit dude i needed that, thank you so muchiamgoat wrote:Nvm needed to open the app
Damn dude I love the riffs you come up with.
The vibe of this song is just perfect. Dark, aggressive, desperate and suffocating. Love it.
I know the ending isn’t done yet but you might end with that blast part changing into a breakdown, keep the blastbeats going with a fade out or have it end abruptly.
Are you going to record bass for your work too? I’d love to record bass more as a session musician. Just gotta get myself a bassguitar again.
i was planning on recording everything for a full demo just out of convenience but i'm not opposed to any collaboration, would love to work with other people. my plan is to re-record everything the best i can for a full album demo after i've finished all the songs. after i finish the demo my goal is to get a band together and try to actual play shows / tour / suck someone off in hopes of a label liking it enough. that's kind of my dream right now.
if i can get the full demo finished, if the reception is good (or even if it isn't) maybe book a real studio and get it recorded for real.
also thank you guys for the positive vibes, really means a lot to me
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Re: nearly finished song
thanks man. the name and lyrics are mostly placeholder stuff so i have something to work withjorsh wrote:Just finally listened to this. Was actually really good. I really like the vocals. They sound tortured and suffocating like vahmpy said. Impressive. I personally hate fade outs. I feel inadequate giving actual composition tips because I’ve never played an instrument in my life but I wouldn’t make it much longer than it is now, imo. I’d like to see the lyrics when finished. Is the song called “swords?”
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Re: nearly finished song
You gotta record this stuff with Rutan man! Once you're ready.
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Re: nearly finished song
Keep the blast, it breaks up nicely.
I know this isn't the final production but...well, I'm biased, so, I'm curious what direction you take it production wise.
Awesome work.
I know this isn't the final production but...well, I'm biased, so, I'm curious what direction you take it production wise.
Awesome work.