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"finished" track #2

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super rough demo of my second finished song. no bass, missing some vocals, bad mix, yadayada. lemme know if you dig or not :idea: :interessant:

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Hell yeah, good job this rules
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That part that starts around 2:55 :xx:
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Fuck yeah
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Holy fucking shit man...
I'm not kidding, I got goosebumps all the way through and this stuff choked me up.

Please for the love of all that is unholy, work on this and get it out there. The metal world fucking deserves this. You deserve this.

I can only imagine what this will sound like with real drums and a great mix. The songwriting is already there.

Fuck I'd even offer to mix this for free.
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great song zim! it kinda reminds me of ulcerate mixed with hate eternal

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This is really good stuff Zim :xx:
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Do you have any videos of you playing this kind of stuff zim? Sounds quite technical
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Listened again and I would definitely jam with Herr Zim :xx:
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going to listen to this but fair warning i just listened to benedictine convulsions
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i appreciate this intensity :xx: in fact there were a couple of times when the blasting stopped and i wondered why you were holding back :eyes:
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everything zim touches is perfect and......big
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nice work zim, keep at it. you will have a really good album to release one day. we will all buy it. but only if the coverart is the pizzagram
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only just realised that now
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iamgoat wrote:
18 Aug 2020, 14:28
Holy fucking shit man...
I'm not kidding, I got goosebumps all the way through and this stuff choked me up.

Please for the love of all that is unholy, work on this and get it out there. The metal world fucking deserves this. You deserve this.

I can only imagine what this will sound like with real drums and a great mix. The songwriting is already there.

Fuck I'd even offer to mix this for free.
:shock: :eyes: don't even know how to respond to this vahmpy, it really means a lot.
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also thanks all for the positive feedback :xx: :xx: ..i'll have an albums worth someday
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Do you have any videos of you playing this kind of stuff zim? Sounds quite technical
i have a couple on instagram. it's really not too technical, lots of string skipping and triplets
https://www.instagram.com/p/B4X-A6Eg-14/
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Following you on IG now :xx:
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if you want honest feedback on music, its probably better not to tell people you wrote it. even if people try to judge objectively, they probably are biased if they know you
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if you want honest feedback on music, get lots of people to listen to it. in order to do that, you need to write and record music and release it, which involves getting feedback from those who know you and may be biased
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I trust mabb folk to tell me if it's shit or not. even if it's not 100% objective it gives me the confidence and motivation to keep going.
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Yeah, I am absolutely objective here. As much as I can anyway.
Listening to the songwriting here and I love it.
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i am super late to the party but this is fuckin' phenomenal dude, i fully second everything vahmpy had to say about it. i am seriously hyped for the proper album/EP/etc., you are absolutely on to something here.

feel free to crash at mine in the post-covid world when you're touring on this shit
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zim wrote:
05 Sep 2020, 04:16
also thanks all for the positive feedback :xx: :xx: ..i'll have an albums worth someday
M.Bison wrote:
19 Aug 2020, 02:59
Do you have any videos of you playing this kind of stuff zim? Sounds quite technical
i have a couple on instagram. it's really not too technical, lots of string skipping and triplets
https://www.instagram.com/p/B4X-A6Eg-14/
awwwww......cute!

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billy you're intensely fuckin' weird, dude. you've got massive pervert energy. cut that shit out, act like a normal person on here or fuck off back to facebook with your fellow 80 year old boaters for bag of diarrhea inside another, bigger bag of diarrhea compatriots
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You guys think gleeso is this Cranston dude? Since gleeso has been back he’s been acting weird even for him and this dude seems to have the same vibe.
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Hitoshura wrote:
06 Sep 2020, 08:13
i am super late to the party but this is fuckin' phenomenal dude, i fully second everything vahmpy had to say about it. i am seriously hyped for the proper album/EP/etc., you are absolutely on to something here.

feel free to crash at mine in the post-covid world when you're touring on this shit
:xx: :xx: :idea: thanks man
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Beyond fucking creepy :kookoo:
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jorsh wrote:
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You guys think gleeso is this Cranston dude? Since gleeso has been back he’s been acting weird even for him and this dude seems to have the same vibe.
don't think it's gleeso, if it is kudos to him for the deep cover weirdness. this hard-on bearer is either croatian or posting via a croat VPN.
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Hitoshura wrote:
07 Sep 2020, 11:11
jorsh wrote:
06 Sep 2020, 13:00
You guys think gleeso is this Cranston dude? Since gleeso has been back he’s been acting weird even for him and this dude seems to have the same vibe.
don't think it's gleeso, if it is kudos to him for the deep cover weirdness. this hard-on bearer is either croatian or posting via a croat VPN.
.....or maybe he's one of vadim von's friends, i mean look at his signature!

i dunno, just guessing ...
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I wouldn't want any of my friends use a picture of me in a forum's signature. You weird, weird man. :redneck:
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I did not expect anything worth a shit when I clicked this.

I am quite surprised and would be interested in more.
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brandonfromohio wrote:
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I did not expect anything worth a shit when I clicked this.

I am quite surprised and would be interested in more.
:beer:

I have two more demos on soundcloud if you want to check them out


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