"finished" track #2
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"finished" track #2
super rough demo of my second finished song. no bass, missing some vocals, bad mix, yadayada. lemme know if you dig or not
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Re: "finished" track #2
Hell yeah, good job this rules
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Re: "finished" track #2
That part that starts around 2:55
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Re: "finished" track #2
Fuck yeah
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Re: "finished" track #2
Holy fucking shit man...
I'm not kidding, I got goosebumps all the way through and this stuff choked me up.
Please for the love of all that is unholy, work on this and get it out there. The metal world fucking deserves this. You deserve this.
I can only imagine what this will sound like with real drums and a great mix. The songwriting is already there.
Fuck I'd even offer to mix this for free.
I'm not kidding, I got goosebumps all the way through and this stuff choked me up.
Please for the love of all that is unholy, work on this and get it out there. The metal world fucking deserves this. You deserve this.
I can only imagine what this will sound like with real drums and a great mix. The songwriting is already there.
Fuck I'd even offer to mix this for free.
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Re: "finished" track #2
Do you have any videos of you playing this kind of stuff zim? Sounds quite technical
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going to listen to this but fair warning i just listened to benedictine convulsions
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i appreciate this intensity in fact there were a couple of times when the blasting stopped and i wondered why you were holding back
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Re: "finished" track #2
nice work zim, keep at it. you will have a really good album to release one day. we will all buy it. but only if the coverart is the pizzagram
more metal
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Re: "finished" track #2
only just realised that now
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Re: "finished" track #2
don't even know how to respond to this vahmpy, it really means a lot.iamgoat wrote: ↑18 Aug 2020, 14:28Holy fucking shit man...
I'm not kidding, I got goosebumps all the way through and this stuff choked me up.
Please for the love of all that is unholy, work on this and get it out there. The metal world fucking deserves this. You deserve this.
I can only imagine what this will sound like with real drums and a great mix. The songwriting is already there.
Fuck I'd even offer to mix this for free.
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Re: "finished" track #2
also thanks all for the positive feedback ..i'll have an albums worth someday
https://www.instagram.com/p/B4X-A6Eg-14/
i have a couple on instagram. it's really not too technical, lots of string skipping and triplets
https://www.instagram.com/p/B4X-A6Eg-14/
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Re: "finished" track #2
Following you on IG now
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Re: "finished" track #2
if you want honest feedback on music, its probably better not to tell people you wrote it. even if people try to judge objectively, they probably are biased if they know you
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Re: "finished" track #2
if you want honest feedback on music, get lots of people to listen to it. in order to do that, you need to write and record music and release it, which involves getting feedback from those who know you and may be biased
more metal
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Re: "finished" track #2
I trust mabb folk to tell me if it's shit or not. even if it's not 100% objective it gives me the confidence and motivation to keep going.
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Yeah, I am absolutely objective here. As much as I can anyway.
Listening to the songwriting here and I love it.
Listening to the songwriting here and I love it.
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Re: "finished" track #2
i am super late to the party but this is fuckin' phenomenal dude, i fully second everything vahmpy had to say about it. i am seriously hyped for the proper album/EP/etc., you are absolutely on to something here.
feel free to crash at mine in the post-covid world when you're touring on this shit
feel free to crash at mine in the post-covid world when you're touring on this shit
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Re: "finished" track #2
billy you're intensely fuckin' weird, dude. you've got massive pervert energy. cut that shit out, act like a normal person on here or fuck off back to facebook with your fellow 80 year old boaters for bag of diarrhea inside another, bigger bag of diarrhea compatriots
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Re: "finished" track #2
You guys think gleeso is this Cranston dude? Since gleeso has been back he’s been acting weird even for him and this dude seems to have the same vibe.
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Re: "finished" track #2
thanks manHitoshura wrote: ↑06 Sep 2020, 08:13i am super late to the party but this is fuckin' phenomenal dude, i fully second everything vahmpy had to say about it. i am seriously hyped for the proper album/EP/etc., you are absolutely on to something here.
feel free to crash at mine in the post-covid world when you're touring on this shit
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Re: "finished" track #2
Must not fap
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Beyond fucking creepy
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don't think it's gleeso, if it is kudos to him for the deep cover weirdness. this hard-on bearer is either croatian or posting via a croat VPN.
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I wouldn't want any of my friends use a picture of me in a forum's signature. You weird, weird man.
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Re: "finished" track #2
I did not expect anything worth a shit when I clicked this.
I am quite surprised and would be interested in more.
I am quite surprised and would be interested in more.
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Re: "finished" track #2
brandonfromohio wrote: ↑27 May 2021, 19:44I did not expect anything worth a shit when I clicked this.
I am quite surprised and would be interested in more.
I have two more demos on soundcloud if you want to check them out
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Re: "finished" track #2
this is cool