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"finished" track #2

Posted: 17 Aug 2020, 08:23
by zim
super rough demo of my second finished song. no bass, missing some vocals, bad mix, yadayada. lemme know if you dig or not :idea: :interessant:


Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 17 Aug 2020, 08:49
by rhino
Hell yeah, good job this rules

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 17 Aug 2020, 08:50
by rhino
That part that starts around 2:55 :xx:

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 18 Aug 2020, 12:05
by Holocaust
Fuck yeah

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 18 Aug 2020, 14:28
by vO)))id
Holy fucking shit man...
I'm not kidding, I got goosebumps all the way through and this stuff choked me up.

Please for the love of all that is unholy, work on this and get it out there. The metal world fucking deserves this. You deserve this.

I can only imagine what this will sound like with real drums and a great mix. The songwriting is already there.

Fuck I'd even offer to mix this for free.

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 19 Aug 2020, 02:59
by M.Bison
Do you have any videos of you playing this kind of stuff zim? Sounds quite technical

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 23 Aug 2020, 15:17
by happiness and harmony
going to listen to this but fair warning i just listened to benedictine convulsions

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 23 Aug 2020, 15:26
by happiness and harmony
i appreciate this intensity :xx: in fact there were a couple of times when the blasting stopped and i wondered why you were holding back :eyes:

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 25 Aug 2020, 05:33
by User
nice work zim, keep at it. you will have a really good album to release one day. we will all buy it. but only if the coverart is the pizzagram

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 25 Aug 2020, 05:38
by Verbal
only just realised that now

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 05 Sep 2020, 04:14
by zim
iamgoat wrote:
18 Aug 2020, 14:28
Holy fucking shit man...
I'm not kidding, I got goosebumps all the way through and this stuff choked me up.

Please for the love of all that is unholy, work on this and get it out there. The metal world fucking deserves this. You deserve this.

I can only imagine what this will sound like with real drums and a great mix. The songwriting is already there.

Fuck I'd even offer to mix this for free.
:shock: :eyes: don't even know how to respond to this vahmpy, it really means a lot.

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 05 Sep 2020, 04:16
by zim
also thanks all for the positive feedback :xx: :xx: ..i'll have an albums worth someday
M.Bison wrote:
19 Aug 2020, 02:59
Do you have any videos of you playing this kind of stuff zim? Sounds quite technical
i have a couple on instagram. it's really not too technical, lots of string skipping and triplets
https://www.instagram.com/p/B4X-A6Eg-14/

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 05 Sep 2020, 07:15
by droidspawn
Following you on IG now :xx:

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 05 Sep 2020, 07:27
by Verbal
if you want honest feedback on music, its probably better not to tell people you wrote it. even if people try to judge objectively, they probably are biased if they know you

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 05 Sep 2020, 14:31
by User
if you want honest feedback on music, get lots of people to listen to it. in order to do that, you need to write and record music and release it, which involves getting feedback from those who know you and may be biased

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 05 Sep 2020, 14:43
by zim
I trust mabb folk to tell me if it's shit or not. even if it's not 100% objective it gives me the confidence and motivation to keep going.

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 05 Sep 2020, 15:26
by vO)))id
Yeah, I am absolutely objective here. As much as I can anyway.
Listening to the songwriting here and I love it.

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 06 Sep 2020, 08:13
by jawn galliano
i am super late to the party but this is fuckin' phenomenal dude, i fully second everything vahmpy had to say about it. i am seriously hyped for the proper album/EP/etc., you are absolutely on to something here.

feel free to crash at mine in the post-covid world when you're touring on this shit

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 06 Sep 2020, 12:20
by jawn galliano
billy you're intensely fuckin' weird, dude. you've got massive pervert energy. cut that shit out, act like a normal person on here or fuck off back to facebook with your fellow 80 year old boaters for bag of diarrhea inside another, bigger bag of diarrhea compatriots

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 06 Sep 2020, 13:00
by droidspawn
You guys think gleeso is this Cranston dude? Since gleeso has been back he’s been acting weird even for him and this dude seems to have the same vibe.

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 06 Sep 2020, 14:46
by zim
Hitoshura wrote:
06 Sep 2020, 08:13
i am super late to the party but this is fuckin' phenomenal dude, i fully second everything vahmpy had to say about it. i am seriously hyped for the proper album/EP/etc., you are absolutely on to something here.

feel free to crash at mine in the post-covid world when you're touring on this shit
:xx: :xx: :idea: thanks man

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 06 Sep 2020, 21:49
by M.Bison
Must not fap

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 06 Sep 2020, 22:11
by droidspawn
Billy Cranston wrote:
06 Sep 2020, 14:09
Image

Beyond fucking creepy :kookoo:

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 07 Sep 2020, 11:11
by jawn galliano
jorsh wrote:
06 Sep 2020, 13:00
You guys think gleeso is this Cranston dude? Since gleeso has been back he’s been acting weird even for him and this dude seems to have the same vibe.
don't think it's gleeso, if it is kudos to him for the deep cover weirdness. this hard-on bearer is either croatian or posting via a croat VPN.

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 07 Sep 2020, 17:13
by vO)))id
I wouldn't want any of my friends use a picture of me in a forum's signature. You weird, weird man. :redneck:

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 07 Sep 2020, 18:43
by droidspawn
:krinor:

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 27 May 2021, 19:44
by brandonfromohio
I did not expect anything worth a shit when I clicked this.

I am quite surprised and would be interested in more.

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 27 May 2021, 22:26
by zim
brandonfromohio wrote:
27 May 2021, 19:44
I did not expect anything worth a shit when I clicked this.

I am quite surprised and would be interested in more.
:beer:

I have two more demos on soundcloud if you want to check them out



Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 25 Jun 2021, 02:01
by deckard
:xx:

Re: "finished" track #2

Posted: 20 Aug 2021, 06:49
by brandonfromohio
this is cool